2015年8月10日月曜日
TOY STORY2
Suddenly, a girl doll cried, "Woody, it's you! "
Andy is Woody's owner.
One day. he can't take Woody to camp, because of Woody's ripped arm.
I think woody should be mend his arm...
Andy's mom carried woody outside in a box.
A man was putting Woody in his bag.
This made me anger.
Woody's friend looked for the way of helping him.
Woody was called by a girl, Jessie .
She was also horse rider and wanted to make friends with him.
Then, Buzz, Woody's best friend come to help him.
But Woody said he woudn't go home.
Because, Andy deserted him.
Buzz said nothing.
He turned and walked away sadly.
I felt sad too.
Finally, Woody came back Andy's home!!
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Williams, M (2012) TOY STORY2
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This made me anger. >
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She was also horse rider
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But Woody said he woudn't go home.
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But Woody said he wouldn't go home, because Andy deserted him.
Next time, try writing paragraphs, rather than starting a new line each sentence.
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